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I really hope this doesn't disappoint. It's from the '80s or '90s, and the interactions between the hero and heroine is rubbing me the wrong way.

This is an okay story, but it really needs a better editor. Is the guy's name Geroge or George? (we get both) Who's talking, Atlas or Lyric? (that's confused also.)

Why do I have the feeling Tommy, Cody's a**hole ex, is going to cause issues? Geez, I really hope not.

I really feel for Liam, and I know Cody wants to be there for him, but there's only so much you can give before there's nothing left. However... I trust Keira Andrews, so I'm hoping this works out. (fingers crossed)

This part had me crying like a baby.