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:/ It was going so well, but when she has a curtain of hair fall around her, right after he's braided it, it sort of snaps my attention away and ruins the pacing of the book.

One second she's sitting on the arm of the loveseat and he's sitting, then suddenly he's walking towards her, and she's suddenly on her feet. These mid to late chapters really need another pass from the editor!

I think this is adorable, but definitely needs another pass from an editor! Right now she was holding a teacup that morphed into a mug within a handful of words, especially as there was no mention of tea to begin with!

:/ I'm hoping this one gets better because right now it's a bit messy and disappointing.