Really slogging my way through this. The timeline jumps make it difficult to keep track of who is who. For example, when Christina and Ethan are interviewing Amy. This scene was right after a lengthy flashback and I had to re-read the first two pages of the next scene before I remembered who Christina and Ethan are. Makes me dizzy 🥴
— Jul 26, 2023 10:32AM
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