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Was slightly interesting at first, can see how it would’ve been a good plot. But it’s now terribly boring. All the characters are merging as they don’t have that much individual differences. The characters are also very annoying which is fine but they’re not interesting enough to be this annoying. Plot is also getting boring.

I’m starting again. Now understanding more context of the author, and the complexity of this writing, I need to start on a clean slate.