Uh... this book sucks. Great concept, but the writing is middle school level. I’m reading it aloud and editing as go for style, repetition, and to remove sexist and slut shaming passages. I can’t do anything about the plot holes or the sections that seem unfinished. I have no idea how this book has a 4.2 star rating. It needs a second (better) writer and a good editor.
— Oct 01, 2017 12:31PM
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