Liking the overall story so far, but the story is starting to drag and I get the urge to shout at the MC's to talk to eachother, insted if filling in how the other feels. And how much inner dialogue can a person have.
I'm really getting stuck, being annoyed every other page and only able to read a few pages at a time. But I'm giving it another shot before I accept defeat
— Jun 08, 2018 01:51AM
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