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That's it, I'm finished. I'm so disappointed, the blurb was right up my alley, but the story drags and drags, imo it misses some basic communication between the MC's.
DNF at 52%.

Liking the overall story so far, but the story is starting to drag and I get the urge to shout at the MC's to talk to eachother, insted if filling in how the other feels. And how much inner dialogue can a person have.
I'm really getting stuck, being annoyed every other page and only able to read a few pages at a time. But I'm giving it another shot before I accept defeat

Liking the overall story so far, but the story is starting to drag and I get the urge to shout to the MC's to talk to eachother, insted if filling in how the other feels. And how much inner diakogue can a person have.
I'm really getting stuck, being annoyed every other page and only able to read a few pages at a time. But I'm giving it another shot before I accept defeat