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I am liking this

"Perhaps if I gain some weight, you won't call me a stick anymore."

"You may hope to one day be a branch."

Ha!

I am disappointed so far. There's a lot of telling rather than showing, which is making it difficult for me to really care about the characters or the story. A lot of information is being spoon fed to the reader, not very stimulating for me. I'd be surprised if I start to love it by the end.

"Thunder rumbled, like God was groaning as he got out of bed" - I love that.

"Thunder rumbled, like God was groaning as he got out of bed" - I love that.