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This book has too many filler scenes. Can't it just end already

"You don't seem to give a fuck what people think of you"

Is that why she didn't wanna go eat where people she knew worked or worried that her youth pastor saw her with... whatshisname?

Uuuugh

This is...baaaaad

Call me old fashion but
"C'mon," He put a hand out and helped Pam to standing. "Go get cleaned up."
is NOT enough aftercare after a rape scene

Can this story move any slower?
I can't seem to make myself care about these characters

This is... not what I thought it would be

Lately I've been hating everything I read so this is a nice change

I had to take a break here,
I wanted to read 44 Chapters about 4 Men before I read SPEED . Seemed smart to just read it first

"He ignored me for months"
Girl you told him to gtfo

"I was left betrayed and dumped"
Well, he did warn you about the first from the get and the second... Again, you told him to leave.

Not an awesome start

Is this Twilight fanfiction?
Because it seem to me like it is. But while Callum is Carlisle the five sons remind me more of the wolves.
We have Sam Jacob Embry Brady and Collin. The last two are usually portrayed as twins so it works

Brooke Davidson . Really?

I stil prefer Easton, he's a total assheart, and I think Daniel... whatever is a date rapist

I don't get the fascination she has for Reed. I like Easton better

"I came here to this party tonight hoping that we could get back together again. I was prepared to forgive you everything because I thought you loved me, and because I loved you."

That 'everything' is rape.
He raped her. They even called it rape. But she 'understands' why he did it. He was just 'stressed'

This is bullshit.
He calls her to bail him out
freaks out
takes her virginity in the backseat of her grandmothers car
laughs about it then oh shits
flirsts with someone else
wants to be taken to breakfast
has sex with her again
tells her it's 'just sex'
And now she's super christian needs to confess her sins and tell her grandparents what she's done
he smirks and laugh alot

I'm seriously second guessing this author

Wow.
This book is stereotypical af
It's prejudice and more than a little racist.

I'm gonna shelf the fuck outta this bs and see if I can finish it some other time.

"Whit a shrug the counselor signed Ben up for crafting, and Mallory giggled. Ben knitting - the image alone tickled her newly discovered funny bone."

Knitting? At camp? In the middle of the woods? What kind of stupid are you?

It's getting better. Not sire why there's over 140 pages left though

I'm half of halfway through this book and I think I should be closer to the end. Nothing happens

You'd think a woman knew more about the female anatomy.
When you've had fingers inside of you there is no more hyman to break and you ate not likely bleed when having sex. Or are you one of those morons thinking 'knuckle deep' won't break it? How about using Google next time you write