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So far Prudence is anything but… 🤭

Ugh! The mother…

I feel like I’ve already read this book, most of all feels like deja vu…

So far this tale feels like told from Jane Bennet or someone wearing pink glasses! All is sweet and easy, there’s no pride or prejudice unless we’re talking about miss Bingley! Mary and Darcy’s cousin, Alex seem to be taking the place of the canon Elizabeth and Darcy with Caroline Bingley meddling and some misunderstandings…

The twins and the eldest Miss Darcy are horrible! Former Colonel Fitzwilliam is so OOC, I really dislike him too! I’m appalled Darcy and Elizabeth have this awful girls for daughters and left them with his obnoxious cousin…

I shall always call the Bingley sisters The Grgonzolas! 🤣🤣🤣

I took the vorpal sword. All I could think to say in reply was, “Thank you.”
Very “millennial” of her! Lol

Like many fantasy stories, I have a big problem with the language... as in ancient beings speaking with a very modern style or even like teenagers but have no knowledge of the modern world 🤔

Did not finished... sorry 😐

Hilarious!
Bingley is such a goof!

“Sometimes he secretly thought of them as the Gorgonzolas.” I will always think of Bingley sisters with this name!!!

So far so good! I’ve been loving everything about it...

It’s a nice a different plot from all the P&P variations I’ve read but it really needs a polish, it has several typos and mistakes that are a distraction to the reader...

I hate inconsistencies! Why they keep saying Jack is dead if Alice saved him in the past that’s why he hated her before! And why they keep saying she killed her classmates in the bus if she changed that too? Ugh! And don’t start me complaining about so much american slang used by 200 yr old British people or the lack of knowledge about catholicity...
lets see if I bother to finish this series