The story is engaging but is starting to grate and the writing is juvenile. Feels like the author thinks that profuse swearing and expressions like "fuckarsery" and lines like "i'll remember it next time I'm climbing aboard your wife" are the height of edge and hilarity and I have images of him giggling as he wrote this high on his own childish edgelord supply. There's a decent book in here if only it would grow up.
— Jul 27, 2026 01:06PM
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