There's never been any physical description of a male character, but this guy can't write a sentence about a woman without talking in detail about how gorgeous she is. There's an entirely pointless flashback where a women blindfolds the main character, takes him to her apartment, and fulfills all his sexual fantasies. Nothing screams "this was written by a clueless man" more than that.
— Aug 08, 2017 04:54PM
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