the flow is horrible. I have to reread the same passages over and over again to figure out why the author would choose to go from telling a story in the past, only to tell a story in the present and then go back to the past? Please pick one, I am tired. I hate when you are in the middle of telling a story from the past only to describe how a car looks in the present!?! No one cares bro, tell the story.
So far, eh
— Dec 18, 2025 09:47PM
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