I’m only 15 pages in, and I know this was written FOREVER ago, but I sure hope the writing gets better soon. It’s not *bad*, it’s just that it’s suffering from the classic characters-telling-each-other-things-they-each-already-know-so-the-author-can-tell-you-things-you-don’t-know syndrome.
— Apr 27, 2018 06:33AM
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