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If i could revise my book in any way I would want the author to give a brief description of what had happened in the time she had skipped. For example, she said 4 months later and would continue the book without saying what had happened during those 4 months. I would want her to say like in these 4 months...and explain what had happened in some short way.

In the book Adorkable a girl name sally, is a total nerd who has a friend that gest all the guys. Hooker, is sally's best friend. Sally calls her hooker because she is always trying to match sally up with guys and it always goes wrong. Sally wants her surprise dates to end so she ends up finding a fake boyfriend to get hooker to stop the dates. only problem is, she gets the most popular guy to do it, her other bff.

The author presents her story by having a prologue before the begging of chapter one explaining the background knowledge. She did this to explain how the main thing began. Each new chapter also is in a new characters point of view. The author does this so you know how each character feels about the conflict. It also shows how each character deals with the problem and how they come across it.

My author tells the story with a prologue in the beginning to show the background. Then each chapter has a new persons point of view. She does this so that we can see how each person feels about the conflict and how they deal with it. This helps up understand each of the characters, and how they feel.

My author tells the story with a prologue in the beginning to show the background. Then each chapter has a new persons point of view. She does this so that we can see how each character feels about the conflict and how they deal with it. This helps up understand each of the characters, and how they feel.

My author tells the story with a prologue in the beginning to show the background. Then each chapter has a new persons point of view. She does this so that we can see how each character feels about the conflict and how they deal with it. This helps up understand each of the characters, and how they feel.

The theme of The one is not to take something for granted or take advantage of someone because they might in the end not want to be treated that way. Prince Maxon is in love with America and will do anything for her and her saftey. He is going to propose to her but finds out she is also in love with someone else. Maxon decides he can't take the heartbreak anymore. America shouldn't have taken his love for granted.

My favorite character in the book the one is America. She is very outgoing and is very brave. America is not afraid to do anything besides to Prince Maxon her feelings that she loves him. Maxon is in lover with her but she is not willing to confess her feelings. America has lost her dad and is in great lost. She is not sure if she is gonna stay or leave.

My book is about a prince having competition. This competition includes 13 girls try to win over his heart. There is now only 4 girls left. America is hoping she will win now that she is sure he heart belongs to prince Maxon. Will he choose her?