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“I’ve seen a lot. Boogeymen and sirens. Grey men and harpies”
Then why you spent a chapter calling a satyr a centaur goat-like creature?? Mariana I love you but your lore ain’t lore-ing in this one.

What’s up with the descriptions in this book? Nina is magic but she doesn’t know the word “satyr” and we have to read fifty times the description “centaur/goat child”? Just explain it once and readers will understand what a satyr/faun is.
Don’t even get me started on “green swamp monster” and the number of times I read the word “smell”