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Can we just take a moment to acknowledge the wasted words and head space used by Keri Lake as every time we switch back to Z & M all we hear about is their obsessive inner monologue of lust driven thoughts. While they’re covered in blood, freezing to death, slipping into delirium. Lazy writing.

Okay, this is good but the use of made-up words saturates the text. It’s exhausting for the reader and convolutes the story.

Kyor lamenting over killing a soldier that has been turned into a Rotting is just more ridiculous drama for the sake of moving this plot along. Make it make sense.

Another thing, why are we being drug through all this ridiculous relationship drama between Kyor and Rose when we could be learning more about the Sanndish? They literally have Stide and Thea traveling with them and we’re learning nothing about them.

Kyor is such a flecking hypocrite. Again, this series has zero similarities to Throne of Glass unless Kyor isn’t the endgame MMC and he ends up being our Chaol. Because bro is trash.

Team Ruben. Love is way more than intense sex. Rose’s feelings for Kyor are lust-driven, and I hate it. How can this series be compared to A Throne of Glass?? Rose and Kyor don’t hold a candle to Ailen and Rowan.

I’m having a really hard time believing the mansion of evicted ‘criminals’ has been left to sit untouched, full of their personal possessions, for 14 years.

I’m struggling. This convo with Caroline is crazy. ‘I can’t help wishing it was you instead.’ Nothing to this point has indicated Caroline could act this way.

The cringiest spicy time ever. Can we all agree that wake-up smex should not include swapping spit?🙄

Using words like Diva and then Arse in a medieval-type world setting is awful. Just the lamest. How am I supposed to ignore the inconsistency??

The editing has gone clean out the window on this last book.

This is so sloooooow.

I don’t want this to end. 😭 Also, there is no way that Leina is not going to loose her shit when she figures out Ryot’s origin story.

It’s pretty slow.

I haven’t picked this up in weeks. I think I’m gonna DNF it.

I’m getting a bit bored. It’s not bad. Just slow.

I dunno

I feel like such a brat saying this but I’m already bored. I feel like we could end the story and wrap it up right about now and I’d be happy. What more do we need with over 200 pages left? Like what?

Scratch that.

It doesn’t make sense to me that Liri doesn’t notice the torture from the blood bond being used on Raeve.

So far the pacing has been quite fast. With multiple character pov’s and they’re all in crisis. Has me nervous for the end of this book, wondering how much of a cliffhanger we’re gonna see at the end.

I’m always annoyed as a reader when the author builds anticipation with the use of interruptions. I can only tolerate so many. We’re on like the 3rd or 4th one at this point. It’s annoying. Get creative already.

I’m really enjoying this. I have several books in my TBR pile that I’ve started and stopped after just a few pages in the last couple weeks. It’s refreshing to start something and get right into it.

I don’t think I can do this. I’m 7 chapters in and they’re still emailing. It’s such dry reading. And it’s cheesy.

Prince Soren thinking ‘no way she can overpower me or outsmart me’. What???!!! Are you kidding me? The inconsistency in this story telling is painful. Rooke literally held him motionless in Airlie’s bedroom and put Tyton to sleep in the dungeons with her magic. I wish the writing was better. 😭

Soren sees evidence of her entire village killed by the very enemy he himself wars against and he still lumps her in with the witches he’s fighting? The author is literally just having him hate her and distrust her for the sake of the ‘enemies to lovers’ plot. It’s too much.

This is sooo long. And frustrating to read.

This author drags things out foreverrrrr. I don’t know if I can do it

I’m really liking this.

At 34% I’m curious how the author is going to make it feel like the story needs so many pages, 600+. So far it’s been great. I’m nervous it’s going to drag out with so many pages left to go.