What I noticed about the writing style: it’s very simple, not filled with much descriptions at all. In fact there are so little descriptions of the surroundings, feelings of the characters, their looks or the way they talk that I notice the lack of it very much. Please set the tone of the scene, describe the tone of voice, give me something. That’s just way too simple at the moment
— Jan 02, 2026 01:29PM
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