So far it's dragging. Other than Wrath none of the characters seem to have any three dimensionality to them. The sister? She was barely there for two pages, how am I supposed to connect to Emilia's grief if I didn't connect with her or her sister. Also the writing style so far is too stretched out, delving into long inner monologues which is not befitting a murder mystery pace
— Dec 15, 2020 11:30PM
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