I find Vis an unconvincing character thus far. Too cold and calculated, as if the only book he's read is 'the 48 laws of power'. I find that, and the lack of teen-like qualities (even in the inner narration) pretty unconvincing despite his predicament.
The writing is good, but I don't find intriguing ideas or relatable (believable) characters and I'll probably DNF if it continues.
— May 15, 2026 11:51PM
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