Strike two. It's very jarring when somebody is written as extremely inoffensive and cloyingly nice, and then BOOM, swerves wildly into having dirty dreams about a woman and THEN, as if being written as nice and decent gives the author full sleaze licence, becomes instantly over-the-top horny. Hold on to your genitals my guy, we're only a quarter of the way in. Or... actually, please let go of them.
— Jun 22, 2024 12:04PM
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