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So far I am not impressed with this style of writing. This reads like a giant run on sentence. There is no pause between scenes or even between perspectives. Also, feelings and mood lack in description, while environments and visual descriptions are over used.

I can't get into this book. I'm pausing for now, to read something else, and come back to this later. ugh.

"Which meant no sex tonight. Every muscle in his body, including his favorite, protested." LOL!!!

finding it hard to go back to this one. I might have to file on my never finished shelf.

So much has happened already. How am I only half way through? I'm enjoying it though.