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I feel like I’m reading a different book. This middle section is very good.

Getting much better

Part one slow: Moaning Myrtle meets Handmaids tale with nothing happening but snooping around a big house.
In middle of Part 2: actually somewhat interesting plot like action. But took over 300 pages to get here. Annoyed with main character. Looking down the barrel of 600 more pages. Hopefully takes off

Good writing but slow. Finally starting to pick up somewhat.