On page 10, Sophia collected eggs "from the empty nests." Page 39 states "Rita and Ozzie had been going steady for over a year." (Currently May.) The next page says they've been together every weekend since Easter, and Rita tells Ozzie, "I've enjoyed these last few weeks with you." I realize they could have been going steady without spending weekends together, but I'm starting to question the writing.
— Jun 28, 2026 08:04PM
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