I love the story but, all this additional characters POV chapters... It could've been an email. Like, without spoiling the plot; the information is need it but, it could've been a artifact facilitated flash scene from Lor's POV, history books or something like that because, all I meet thinking is, "how do our protagonists find all this out?" Or, "Do we (the reader) know everything and our MCs don't?"⌚to find out.
— Feb 06, 2025 03:33PM
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