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Still don't care abt anyone. Ben the big black guy with black eyes widow. I thought that was funny

I don't like the author's writing style. She's more like telling like a movie instead of getting into the character's head

Lana has the IQ of a toddler. Why do they keep saying each other's name? Lana Max Max Lana ughh

Conversations are weird. Like the park ave bridge. Nobody says that especially New Yorkers. The word THE in front everything is so cringe

Ugh

There's a man following that lady and she's way too damn calmnabout it. Still terrible writing at least the scene with the mother wasn't too bad

Terrible writing. Charaters are changing voice speaking differently.

The writing is very poor so far.

He froze a million times

What the hell is a dude's night? And isn't it always in person???

It got worse. He got a name for his you know what. And it's Charlie. I'm speechless

I have no words. I thought this book couldn't get any worse. The writing about the intimacy sucks.

Kiss me mouth to mouth. This book is so cringe.

I feel like chapter one was unnecessary or at least way longer than it needed to be. And the word Magick with a K just weird.

She says she's 30 every time and how terrible it is .

Very confusing and all over

I hate the man lead

Open your damn mouth Kareena had me gaging

Find a litte disrespectful sexy. I'm going to puke if a guy say that to me and not blush

They started acting like children and throwing stuff at each other -_-