Already not off to a great start. I do appreciate the world-building so far, and the set-up is certainly intriguing, but... what is this gold font for one POV, standard for another?? It feels like a cringy gimmick, and it just makes it harder to read the text. It also feels like it's been done because the two 1st person POVs aren't distinctive enough without it.
I'm going to finish, the concept is neat, but... eh.
— Oct 20, 2017 05:52AM
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