Writing and dialogue are good; the "texting" pieces are very cringe-worthy, so those lines did not age well (people don't text like CU 2day anymore). Male MC is very hot and fun, female MC is kinda annoying at times. Alice in Wonderland had nothing to do with this story except for the MC's name and a cloud shaped like a rabbit. 2nd time reading this, won't continue series.
— Dec 24, 2021 11:46AM
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