Next thought - there is something uneven about the characters in this book. I think it’s Bonnie being a cross between a Mary Sue and a character that would fit with Beau.
Another thing that seems odd is how Hal, Bonnie’s dad, reacts to all of this. I’m from a small, rural, tourist town in Montana. Had a man come after me the was Beau does with Bonnie? My dad would have taken a shotgun after him.
— Jul 26, 2022 12:30PM
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