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Good progress, the pace is nice, great plot build-up. The chemistry is explosive because holy shit I love it. Gives Zade Meadows vibes and we are here for it. The virgin-Christian side of the characters is pissing me off but I trust the plot. Briony is better than a lot of FMCs I have read. She has the guts to stand up and we are here for it. Looking forward to the progress

execution is not very good. Everything is all over the place. The idea is there but the writing seems like a draft than a finished novel. When Royce got stabbed and it was revealed to us, I had to go through that passage 5 times to make sure I didn't miss how he got stabbed on a boat with his friends and sister. I wanna give this book a chance so I will commit to it

I want to dnf it so bad right now, the writing is just plain bad. The overuse of the word "chick" is pissing me off so much. there is no plot whatsoever, I thought there will be good smut but it is just plain boring but I need to get a start at my reading challenge. I really wanna get this over with because this book is painful. I am not being insensitive but Fallon is too weak of a character