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Well-developed descriptions of characters and scenery, followed by occasional flashes of the strange. Unexpected changes in points of view, lots of drinking episodes, and a couple of undeveloped references to deformed children and revenants that allude to relationships with the strange phenomenon being exploited.

Character development is rudimentary, but adequate in a manner reminiscent of those in Nelson Algren's The Neon Jungle. The authors point of view shifts unexpectedly on the same page.