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DONT TALK TO ME. IM A CONSPIRACY THEORIST WITH THREADS EVERYWHERE BC WTF

Wtf. Time travel but not time travel. But maybe purgatory? But also limbo. But also its own pocket of time/space. But also the outside world. But also this book is everything and nothing at once. Holy shit. I love it.

The simple fact that this book has me out here with a flow chart like a conspiracy theorist is CRAZY.

Honestly, the beginning is a big slow, but after the thing *ifkyk* it picks up a lot. There is a little of repetition with Daunis and her inner monologue. I found myself going...."you said that previously, I get it" and i completely understand these same thoughts might be relevant to the situation at hand, but it felt worded the SAME WAY as previously said. Other than that, fucking love it.

Bruh. This main character is having a rough time for NO REASON. Book reads like day one, day two, which is annoying. There's no true flow between days or sense of how much time had passed. The FMC, who is she? She could be made of cardboard and I wouldn't know. There's no established reason to care about ANYONE because....well, it wasnt established.

Moving a bit fast. I think we're skipping details. Beginning needs more fleshed out.

The writing is very dry and does a lot of telling than showing.