I’m only a few chapters in and I am tempted to DNF because I hate the writing… Short, choppy sentences, and apparently these characters have never heard of contraction words (I.e. “I’m” in place of “I am” or “I’ve” in place of “I have,” etc.) because they sound like formal robots. This is first person narrative done poorly in my opinion. Maybe will try pushing through.
— Jun 10, 2023 11:51PM
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