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The grammar is horrendous. Was this translated from another language? It is very difficult to understand at times. Fragmented and run on sentences make it confusing. This could have been a great story, but instead it is very frustrating.

“...the government must have doing something right”. Page 218.
The very poor editing ruined this book for me. It could have been a good story but the lack of prepositions and other glaring editing errors was too annoying.