Okay, this is way too much to take in from one character only, all at once. I had already noticed all of that, but still. Wasn't there a smoother way to present all of those facts? This is Deus ex Machina to its extreme, I sometimes feel I could have written it better. Also, Jocelyn seems to know too much for someone who's been in a coma for about two entire books.
— Feb 21, 2017 06:12PM
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