If I read one more line like the following: “Avery’s voice softens a tiny bit and her arms relax to her sides, which improves Cameron’s view of her perfect little chest.” I might actually barf. Is this how men truly think? I mean I get it, you’re trying you write from the perspective of a 30 year old man as a woman but like really? It’s making me despise this character.
— May 19, 2023 03:05PM
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