not a huge fan of the split time approach. i’m more invested in the ‘then’ chapters and find the ‘now’ corporate interview sections dull. they also blatantly spoil what’s coming.
i also find the captain’s tragic backstory and her relationship with kane to be too much, too quickly. i’m not invested in them as characters yet, and these moments (backstory reveal; acting on feelings) do not feel earned.
— Jan 31, 2023 07:50AM
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