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Quin, he is stunned because he's flabbergasted that you were stupid enough to allow a stranger to climb in your window and violate you more than once, without raising any alarm about it whatsoever! Of course, he assumes you knew it was him and you were playing along. The alternative would be that you are mentally slow!! I will say I am thankful for the lack of screaming, but we went from one extreme to the next!

"I might be brave, but I'm not stupid." Debatable.

“Stop fucking moving, or I’ll paint the floor with your brains.” I feel you, bruh, cause I'm sick of it too.

At some point, can we please get a different female character? The histrionic, screaming woman - it's like reading the same book over and over. Yes, we like that they're not just rolling over for a biker, but when do we get the quiet planner/escape artist? Can we get her? All the screaming and fighting is making me want to side with the biker's violence just so they can be quiet! Shut up! No one can hear you anyway!

Now she's upset because her boyfriend, who is part of a racist biker group, and whom she suspects is racist yet never discusses race with, doesn't understand the nuances of her lightskinned blackness. Keep me near the cross, Lord. This author actually writes really well, and the story would be so much better if it wasn't interjected with foolishness, periodically.

Juliette is exhausting. Why are we still with all the theatrics given the fact that, when she had the opportunity to escape, she decided to run TO Hawk? So why are we still enduring all this banshee nonsense? Girl, hush.

Juliette, come on now. So disappointing. Her being so adamant about getting away from Hunter and then deciding, mid escape, to...go to him??? Literally makes no sense at all. Like forget the character, the story makes no sense. How did she know exactly where he was? How did the bikers track her to him without her saying? This book, for all its issues etc, was actually going well. Much better than Book 1.

Page 83 "Hunter," he grunts as he smacks my ass hard. "My name is Hunter."

Pg 114 “Fuck you, Hunter.” I scowl.
“How do you know my name?”

She must have gone through my wallet. Goddamn it… She’s right. I drink too much.

What?? Editors, please!

She's finally showering after they already had rancid sex. Just disgusting. And how is she already showing? She's literally three weeks pregnant. A month at best.

So Anna has literally just spent days in a well/hole, crapping in a bucket, and yet the very first order of business, after they make it to a hotel, is not a shower?? They're literally in the bathroom, having sexy times, while the water warms up, after Southpaw said she smelled RANCID when they rescued her?? Are we serious? Nastiness. Cleanse yourself!! I'm cringing through all this. Where is the soap??

I hate when books that I've been enjoying start to get silly. So, Selene's security team has been recalled, and her agents fired, and it doesn't occur to her to tell Beck and Cal? She's just walking around unprotected? Shaw and the other one don't think to get in touch with Beck and Cal and let them know?? In what world does either of these scenarios make any sense?