So much exposition, both through narration and dialogue. Why make the radio say the exact year if a few chapters later we find out that cassette players are modern technology? Why explicitly describe Dante's family as Mexican if they have a whole conversation about it a chapter later? Why describe the father as distant, when you could just show us that he is! How did this get past an editor?
— Jan 27, 2024 11:18PM
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