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His vision goes but he can use a mobile and text?

Don't like him sharing her diagnosis with her brother. That was up to her to share.

Post sex he's actually thanking her for using his first name! There's something very sad and off about this.
He's needy. She's uninvolved. Everyone else is plotting.

Not feeling this. There's moments of feeling but more to do with the adopting dad. Nothing between the couple except sparkly destiny.
The appearance of an ex is stilted and seems a keeping to theme rather than part of the story.
Characters from previous book are less sweet viewed from the outside.

So far we've learnt FL suffers anxiety and had an abusive ex. ML has a big dick, f*&@ked a woman in the garden and repeatedly intimidates FL.

This is RED FLAG RUN GIRLIE not romance.
Author has an obsession with oral.

It starts with the female lead having an existential crisis over a bidet. Um...

Honestly I've no clue what I'm reading or why but it's very entertaining.

She's pregnant. Not had a period since the wedding.
Been married four months and not noticed that? They didn't have sex for weeks into the marriage, timeline is a bit wavy.

This is far to slow nothing is happening.
More about the kid than relationship.
Vague threats 'I'll tell you when I know' she's far, far to passive and trusting.

Labeled Book One, so why are there discussions of previous stories/characters?
From logging to motorcycle club - no clue.

seriously? that's a new first aid technique!
he's been mawled by wolves, lost blood, barely conscious - so she strips and gets into bed with him.

author has a serious dislike of vegetarians and people with food intolerances.
I'm vegetarian.

I'm actually enjoying this. Not sure why she stresses her tbr, to me a pile tbr is a thing of beauty! And the house sounds amazing. Local chatacters aren't intruding.

pretty obvious where this is going. bad guy needs to be really bad! but like that the 'other woman' Celeste actually seems smart and decent.

This is too long for so little plot.
It would work if half the length but with this word count desperately needs some action, reactions, them getting out of their heads.

Undecided, very deep introspective vibe. Not the expected tone from the title. It's very slow.
Rating could change drastically depending how it progresses.

I'm sure the kids have changed ages

this is very repetitive. mystery seems obvious. at times more a real estate portfolio than a story. not enough fleshing of characters; I don't care or particularly like her.

1 I know you communicated but not what was said.
2 tell her exactly what was said

dress the computer jargon how you wish even I can spot the security fail our genius is ignoring.

Really hoping they start talking not these sudden tingles.

And what's with his eyes constantly slipping to between hers? Never encountered thst before. Yours eyes slip yo the side but not central, that's focusing - so he's staring a hole through her forehead? It's...odd.

I'm actually enjoying this the verbal combat is amusing. But physical intimidation isn't, she's what 5'7", I'm 5'2" so I've experienced it, and no.

Is someone spitting on your clit attractive?
Maybe I'm prudish or odd to be thinking 'he did what?'
This is mid argument, kinda. Start of third sex scene - which are all cringe. 'Baby girl' is only sexy in criminal minds.

So you employ a matchmaker to setup you father, and arrange it on the second anniversary of his wife and son dying!

Is it just me going huh?

She lost her sister 5yrs ago and is still grieving.

He lost his wife of 30yrs and his son 2yrs ago and it's decided he's been alone too long?!

20yr age gap and his appreciation of her is borderline uncomfortable.

Competing anxiety and trauma with psycho-babble.
Finding this book hard going.

This feels long and too much like a fanfic.
More about OCD anxiety than romantic tension.

This guy is mercurial, that's not good. The fact it's continuing and combined with jealousy is giving me serious abuser stay clear vibes.