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pretty obvious where this is going. bad guy needs to be really bad! but like that the 'other woman' Celeste actually seems smart and decent.

This is too long for so little plot.
It would work if half the length but with this word count desperately needs some action, reactions, them getting out of their heads.

Undecided, very deep introspective vibe. Not the expected tone from the title. It's very slow.
Rating could change drastically depending how it progresses.

I'm sure the kids have changed ages

this is very repetitive. mystery seems obvious. at times more a real estate portfolio than a story. not enough fleshing of characters; I don't care or particularly like her.

1 I know you communicated but not what was said.
2 tell her exactly what was said

dress the computer jargon how you wish even I can spot the security fail our genius is ignoring.

Really hoping they start talking not these sudden tingles.

And what's with his eyes constantly slipping to between hers? Never encountered thst before. Yours eyes slip yo the side but not central, that's focusing - so he's staring a hole through her forehead? It's...odd.

I'm actually enjoying this the verbal combat is amusing. But physical intimidation isn't, she's what 5'7", I'm 5'2" so I've experienced it, and no.

Is someone spitting on your clit attractive?
Maybe I'm prudish or odd to be thinking 'he did what?'
This is mid argument, kinda. Start of third sex scene - which are all cringe. 'Baby girl' is only sexy in criminal minds.

So you employ a matchmaker to setup you father, and arrange it on the second anniversary of his wife and son dying!

Is it just me going huh?

She lost her sister 5yrs ago and is still grieving.

He lost his wife of 30yrs and his son 2yrs ago and it's decided he's been alone too long?!

20yr age gap and his appreciation of her is borderline uncomfortable.

Competing anxiety and trauma with psycho-babble.
Finding this book hard going.

This feels long and too much like a fanfic.
More about OCD anxiety than romantic tension.

This guy is mercurial, that's not good. The fact it's continuing and combined with jealousy is giving me serious abuser stay clear vibes.

I'm mostly liking this despite Callan acting like a dick.
But forcing a anxious (and virgin) friend to share a tent and bed with a big strong man she doesn't entirely get along with? That's not friendship.

i want a Cinnamon roll

And immediately after triggering a PTSD panic attack, guy three moves in. Honestly for this woman's pussy to be constantly so wet I suspect a medical issue!

But they've skipped the sofa sex initiation, plus her daughter doesn't seem to be in the house.

So she's nervous around men and protective of her daughter - but just had sex on the sofa while her daughter is upstairs with her door open, after already previously made out on the sofa with another man who stayed over.

The fact the men have discussed the taste of her pussy and in front of the third man, reads more degrading than hot.

ok, if lacking visual cues. find I'm skimming though.

i'm not sure what I'm reading lol

So wordy. Stopping to quote Shakespeare mid rescue?!

Forgot I was reading this, picked it up but couldn't remember who was who.

Not holding interest.

Hmmm I collect vintage cosys but this'll go back to the charity shelf.

I've skimmed and WTF on every level.
The first two were readable, this is a complete mess.