So my biggest issue with this book so far is that, as it's part of a duology, the main goal of the story is dragged right out. Like it's been over 100 pages and not much has happened. At this rate, they'll be leaving on the quest for the Ivory Key in the last 10 pages, which wouldn't be cool. At least follow the book synopsis! Gah! Different character chapters are okay probably because it's not first person.
— Feb 06, 2024 08:25PM
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