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The story in itself is good, but the book is written a bit like a manuscript for a play or a movie. It gets a bit tiring to read. An editor should probably have looked it over one more time before publishing it, it just needs an easier flow.

The story in itself is good, but the book is written a bit like a manuscript for a play or a movie. It gets a bit tiring to read. An editor should probably have looked it over one more time before publishing it, it just needs an easier flow.