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I like this author but the main character in this new series in the type I cannot stand. She lies to get a job and then get ties up in a murder, instead of staying out of it, which numerous people suggest, she keeps investigating. She is neurotic, her personal relationships are messed up and she is almost always late.

She calls her clients lovelies. Ick

She calls her clients “lovelies” ick

She calls her clients, “Lovelies” ick.

Wanted to like this but on page 54, I think it is a DNF

Needs better editing errors interrupt the flow

Needs better editing, I have found three errors and it interrupts the flow of the book.