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I just hope this book develops into interestingness soon. The characters' dialogues remind me of the over-the-top mysteriousness of those in CSI. They don't read naturally. I'll persevere.

Interesting twists and turns so far but, narratively I struggle with the strange shifts between florid verbiage (e.g. Kissinger using the toilet on the plane) and quick successions of brief, almost telegrammatic actions (e.g. Lopez lighted a cigarette. He took a drag. He didn't like it. He threw it on the floor. He crushed the cigarette under his sole. His sole was tarred. ...) PS – I really dislike Maura Montorsi.