I like that the narrator has some flaws. I have no idea how he's going to break through with this main character. The descriptions of psycho therapists seems pretty believable, speaking from experience. A mistake was quoting Winnicot twice in the span of 50 pages. That really broke my immersion... lol. It suddenly felt like he was writing a college paper on psychology
— Mar 29, 2023 07:23PM
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