I'm liking this so far, except the constant mentioning of Lady Rahela's breasts. Like, the point was made the first time. Her breasts are not crucial to the plot that it would be necessary to constantly remind the reader how big they are. There's a lot more that makes a woman desirable. The plot itself, like the actual plot, is intriguing and I'm excited to see where it goes.
— Aug 06, 2026 05:53AM
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