Why do I feel like I’m re-reading 50 Shades again? So far, the writer has the stylization of a 13 year old. “Butterflies in my tummy”? How many times can one person “tilt their head”. “Wetness between my thighs” is as trite as 50 Shade’s “down there.” Only if this story was written by someone with more of a vocabulary, or her editor actually did her job and edited. Lol.
— Jun 22, 2023 10:16AM
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