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I can’t stand best friend characters who are only there to go “Oooooh you ~like~ the MMC, don’t you?” Hopefully Saipha grows another personality trait

Even if Zavier hid the vial of blood, the signature would still have been green. This doesn’t hold up

Isn’t Banner a general? Why is his specialty throwing daggers? That’d be almost useless on a battlefield

The idea of maps being totally banned in Turah feels ridiculous but I guess societies without written language navigate their territory just fine…

Jesus Christ is she still jealous of Saria? The woman died!

The scale on the map is a lot smaller than I realized if Treow and Ashmore are only a days ride apart

We’re almost halfway through the book and only now is Odessa trying to be a proactive instead of passive protagonist

These training scenes with Tillia really highlight just how garbage of a teacher the Guardian is. Tillia is teaching her actual skills instead of just mocking her for being bad at fighting

Why does she care if the Guardian has a lover? He’s been nothing but insufferable to her. There is zero chemistry between them.

“I’m no flight risk.”

Oh my fucking god. How did nobody catch that?? This is a pseudo medieval setting! There are no planes! Why didn’t you just say “I’m not going to run” or something like that

I do not believe that a big famous blogger/podcaster would just let Michelle onto the show without any sort of vetting process. Especially when she’s claiming to be involved in such a highly publicized missing persons case

I really hate the reluctant royal trope sometimes. This kingdom of hundreds or thousands is going to be facing a deadly crisis soon and all the kingdoms have to cooperate to survive, but politics is sooooo boring and overrated for our FMC! How quirky and relatable! /s

So these characters all have some sort of anime-ass starburst in their eyes? God help anyone who tries to make a live-action adaptation of this

“Meishi drew on his love like a fragile Oriental hummingbird.”

Ew, god. Can white men please be normal about Asian women? This was written in 2024!! I can’t believe people still talk like this.

It’s fucked up how casual Niamh is about mind wiping people. Holly deserves to know about her dad’s affair and she deserves to tell her mom about it if she wants. What kind of friend covers for the cheater??