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What the fuck is the scale of this map if they have an underwater convoy going from Arariel to Hadramiel??

Maybe this is my asexuality talking but I haaaate the idea of some magical soul-binding marriage that you can never leave. What happens if the person you did the ritual of Dhihsin with someone who was completely misrepresenting themself to lure you into a false sense of security?

I really don’t like Liam torturing her

We’re not on Earth. What does tribal tattoo mean in this setting?

It’s cool that Samkiel’s dad said gay rights I guess but he’s not going to be producing any heirs with a husband. That seems counter to Unir’s desire for his son to “breed”

I wish there was a map or diagram of all these different planets/realms. I’m having trouble keeping track

I know her complaining about her shirt being damaged in a fight is meant to make her quirky and relatable but it honestly has the opposite effect. It sucks all the tension out of the fight

All right we’ve established that Diana can turn into a wyvern. How much says she conveniently forgets this during action scenes in the future

I don’t understand the timeline. Dianna has been serving Kaden for centuries at least but the sister she is doing all this for has only just graduated? What has she been doing for the past few centuries?

If we’re not on earth, how can there be a “typical horror movie type” of werewolf? We the audience know nothing about the cinematic history of this setting

Ethan is a very bland name for a vampire king

>the screams were my favorite part
>”I don’t like it”

Not even a page apart. Make up your mind, lady

Okay yeah this guy is 27. Blaming him for stuff from the Gods War is insane

Wait, when the captive was called a celestial I figured he was some sort of immortal. If he has a mom like a normal mortal person is that not true? If this guy wasn’t there, why is Dianne mad at him for something that happened multiple millennia ago??

Dianna’s little speech about the Gods
War might be the clunkiest exposition dump I’ve ever seen

Holy instalove, Batman! She’s known this guy for one(1) day and she’s already getting upset about the thought of leaving him

Oh I’m so sorry the sounds of people wasting away from disease is annoying you, Kai /s

Also I’m confused by the tech level of this setting. Olivia describes a dress she made as an “original design” which would suggest that there’s mass-produced outfits like what we have now in the modern world. Is this setting meant to be post Industrial Revolution?

I think we’re meant to find Olivia charming but i mostly find her extremely aggravating

So Jadon only stepped in to save her because she’s hot? What a hero! /s