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If we’re not on earth, how can there be a “typical horror movie type” of werewolf? We the audience know nothing about the cinematic history of this setting

Ethan is a very bland name for a vampire king

>the screams were my favorite part
>”I don’t like it”

Not even a page apart. Make up your mind, lady

Okay yeah this guy is 27. Blaming him for stuff from the Gods War is insane

Wait, when the captive was called a celestial I figured he was some sort of immortal. If he has a mom like a normal mortal person is that not true? If this guy wasn’t there, why is Dianne mad at him for something that happened multiple millennia ago??

Dianna’s little speech about the Gods
War might be the clunkiest exposition dump I’ve ever seen

Holy instalove, Batman! She’s known this guy for one(1) day and she’s already getting upset about the thought of leaving him

Oh I’m so sorry the sounds of people wasting away from disease is annoying you, Kai /s

Also I’m confused by the tech level of this setting. Olivia describes a dress she made as an “original design” which would suggest that there’s mass-produced outfits like what we have now in the modern world. Is this setting meant to be post Industrial Revolution?

I think we’re meant to find Olivia charming but i mostly find her extremely aggravating

So Jadon only stepped in to save her because she’s hot? What a hero! /s

The main character just referred to someone as a “high-functioning Autie” so now I’m side-eyeing the book hard

Hm. The fact that the prologue of the book is just a 9-page infodump about the setting lore fills me with concern. There really wasn’t a way to integrate that into the actual narrative?