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Appalling writing

"We both lay back down, and she looked at me in the eyes, and we were sad together for a while. I'll never forget how that felt. Like not being hungry." [...]

"And all the sudden here's Emmy touching my back. I almost shit myself, rolling over to see her lying two inches away."

[...] her face or her toothoaste smell, and it would give me these waking up feelings as regards to the guy downstairs."

Most boring, uninspiring and bland type of writing... the self-inflicted misery continues.

'Hillbilly' ugh, I have to stop letting people recommend books to read that are so weirdly written. Even by 'Women Prize for Fiction' winners...

Hmmm, no ability in learning how to read for more than 100 pages; now, in less than 1 and a half pages, we're reading the bible and saying things like "I 'wadn't' aware words could hold so much. I din't know a sentence could be so full."

I am not even sure you knew what a sentence was, let alone how to speak to convey subtext and emotion. *eyeroll*

"Keep going" was quite lovely to begin with, reading it once or twice did create the desired emotional bond, but when it's still being repeated so much, the feeling has become just a repetitive annoyance.

He met her gaze. "You are exactly the same. You are mine. No matter the package that comes in."

** eyeroooooooooooll**

'I very early decided London was synonymous with physical exhaustion and nervous anxiety, and the one thing I would never be was a commuter - a determination[...].'

Back to an old love, ready for another heart break.

'You'll be kissing a long time, my friend, before you kiss any of this away''

'You'll be kissing a long time, my friend, before you kiss any of this away''

'You'll be kissing a long time, my friend, before you kiss any of this away''

'You'll be kissing a long time, my friend, before you kiss any of this away''

'You'll be kissing a long time, my friend, before you kiss any of this away''

"I was one of those romantic sorts who chose their majors based on taste and spiritual affinity, not on what's going to earn them a living. I must be one of the world's last remaining fools."

WTF?!

100+ pages of pure nothingness... *sigh*

En serio, pasa o no pasa algo en este libro ? ugh