I'm going to be a voice outside the general chorus but I feel this worked so much better as a Harry Potter fanfic. You can superimpose the HP characters with the Alchemised ones and suddenly you feel the stakes, otherwise, who the frick is Luc and why does Helena give a shit about him? Also, Hermione getting named Helena happened in Brigitte Knightley's book too and it's weird it happened twice.
— Sep 29, 2025 10:36PM
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