The premise of the story is interesting, however, the author worked overtime to be inclusive and it was just too obvious, which made me roll my eyes at times. I don’t appreciate it when an author tries so hard to cover all the social bases that it doesn’t feel genuine. When I was 90% finished I almost quit. But I wanted to see what happened with the whole box issue.
— Sep 08, 2026 09:25PM
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